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Hello, I am Shawn Lindsey. I grew up in Deer Park, a small town with a lot of things happening there. I live in a house with my grandmother, mother and little sister. I am currently attending Deer Park High School while working as a Mark Representative. Considering I have put behind me, the things of my past, I am now able,to grab at the chance to make my dreams a reality.